Mr. 貢丸

You know...you make many mistakes in that article.

First, I think you translate English from Chinese. Frankly, if one foreigner read the article, he probably couldn't understand what you say.

Wrong 1: Nobody says" everyond good." You just say"Hi, everyone."

Wrong 2: The word "understand" means "figure out".

Very happy understanding everyone.=>I am happy to know everyone.

Wrong 3: If  the grammar is wrong ,please much and much include .

This sentence translates totally; I can understand what you mean- you want to say if you make mistakes, you hope I can forgive you.

You can write this way---Pardon me for making mistakes.

Then, I suggest you can check mistakes yourself after you write by look up dictionary.

Last but not least, nice try!! And keep going!